It's a good thing I am lax about clearing my sent folder. I am again
copying this to the volunteer list because if you don't get it privately
I hope you can get it as a group email. I am pasting my email to you of
July 30. Read down until you come to your list of questions. I have
placed my answers in braces because you used brackets in your questions
and each answer appears right after each question. Here is my email of
July 30:
Re: Questions about the book, Universe Two
I will put my answers in braces after each item.
On 7/29/2018 8:16 PM,
ghobbs1@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
wrote:
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Hi,
Do you still have the book, Universe Two by Robert Silverberg and Karen
Haber? I have some questions and I have brackets around the word I'm
not sure
of.
1. pg 27, ...the thin [ives] of static... {The word is waves.}
2. pg 32, ...the box watches my [comat]. {The word is correct. It is comat.}
3. pg 114 ...on the early days of the [aaawh].Gossamer Hegemony. {The
word is correct, aaawh. This story obviously has a lot of made up words.}
4. pg 114 ... its [quk] hum powered us.upstream. {The word is quiet.}
5. pg 118 ... hissing veils of the [teiyaniin]... {The so-called word is
correct, teiyaniin.}
6. pg 118 ... (I thought) contributed to its [hequency]. {The word is
frequency.}
7. pg 119 The whole island is moving, [thing]. {The word is writhing.}
8. pg 119 Oli asked Green what [d] like. {The word is two words, it looked.}
9. pg 119 Just a stone. I can't--" his voice [?] }The missing word is
broke.}
10. pg 119 diphthongs, skewed and [mumconsonants]. {The word is two
words, and mumbled.}
11. pg 119 I hear it burning in bowls of [?] {The missing word is stone.}
12. pg 119 ...where she was going. [I real].{The phrase should be, I
realized I'd heard no birds since we left the river.}
13. pg 127 [?] wings wept blood, or flame. }The questionable word must
be a stray character because the word wings is the first word on the
page. The last
word on the preceding page is His.}
14. pg 134 I AM MORE THAN A HUNDRED THOUSAND [APSES] {The missing word
or words are million synapses.}
15. pg 134 ...where fraternite is that [cor] from these people {The word
is coming.}
16. pg 205 .. from the [iled] paterfamiliae of the United Houses, {The
word is assembled.}
17. pg 205 [do] was one of the two young soldiers {The word is Tonio.}
18. pg 294 ...the clone by naked [X} a disposable pallet. {That
sengtence should read, the clone lay naked on a disposable pallet.}
19. pg 294 The [meats] are gene-programmed... {The word is correct, meats.}
20. pg 312 Always this embarrassment, [pies] illusions about him, {The
word embarrassment ends a sentence and should have a period after it.
The first
word in the next sentence is People's.}
21. pg 312 ....I should notify the Nexus police," [Dar ?] {The two words
should be Dana said.}
22. pg 338 ...he would easily and without guilt take it [?} me {The word
is from.}
23. pg 346 ...I feel like a [?] {The word is swim.}
24. pg 385 The [?] held where it had been empty. {The sentence should
read, The field where it had been was empty.}
Thank you,
Elizabeth Hobbs
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On 8/13/2018 11:38 PM, Roger Loran Bailey (Redacted sender rogerbailey81
for DMARC) wrote:
I am copying this to the volunteer discussion list because your question makes me think that replying to you personally may not be getting through. When you sent me the list of questions I remembered replying immediately saying that I would have to get to them later and, as a matter of fact, I did so the next day. I went through each of your questions and gave my answers after each one in braces. I should still have that email in my sent folder and if I can find it I should be able to copy it and send it to you again. But I am going to have to put you off until the next day again because it has gotten a bit late here. Let me know if you get this message either personally or on the volunteer list. I was wondering why you were taking so long to upload it because the questions seemed to be the last step in the proofreading process. It looks like you never got my email though.
On 8/13/2018 10:32 PM, ghobbs1@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
Hi, Roger,
Did you have any luck with my questions?
Liz Hobbs
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*From: *"rogerbailey81" <rogerbailey81@xxxxxxx>
*To: *"Liz Hobbs" <ghobbs1@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
*Sent: *Monday, July 30, 2018 9:14:14 AM
*Subject: *Re: Questions about the book, Universe Two
I will put my answers in braces after each item.
On 7/29/2018 8:16 PM, ghobbs1@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
Hi,
Do you still have the book, Universe Two by Robert Silverberg and
Karen Haber? I have some questions and I have brackets around
the word I'm not sure of.
1. pg 27, ...the thin [ives] of static... {The word is waves.}
2. pg 32, ...the box watches my [comat]. {The word is correct. It
is comat.}
3. pg 114 ...on the early days of the [aaawh].Gossamer Hegemony.
{The word is correct, aaawh. This story obviously has a lot of
made up words.}
4. pg 114 ... its [quk] hum powered us.upstream. {The word is quiet.}
5. pg 118 ... hissing veils of the [teiyaniin]... {The so-called
word is correct, teiyaniin.}
6. pg 118 ... (I thought) contributed to its [hequency]. {The
word is frequency.}
7. pg 119 The whole island is moving, [thing]. {The word is
writhing.}
8. pg 119 Oli asked Green what [d] like. {The word is two words,
it looked.}
9. pg 119 Just a stone. I can't--" his voice [?] }The missing
word is broke.}
10. pg 119 diphthongs, skewed and [mumconsonants]. {The word is
two words, and mumbled.}
11. pg 119 I hear it burning in bowls of [?] {The missing word is
stone.}
12. pg 119 ...where she was going. [I real].{The phrase should
be, I realized I'd heard no birds since we left the river.}
13. pg 127 [?] wings wept blood, or flame. }The questionable word
must be a stray character because the word wings is the first
word on the page. The last word on the preceding page is His.}
14. pg 134 I AM MORE THAN A HUNDRED THOUSAND [APSES] {The missing
word or words are million synapses.}
15. pg 134 ...where fraternite is that [cor] from these people
{The word is coming.}
16. pg 205 .. from the [iled] paterfamiliae of the United Houses,
{The word is assembled.}
17. pg 205 [do] was one of the two young soldiers {The word is
Tonio.}
18. pg 294 ...the clone by naked [X} a disposable pallet. {That
sengtence should read, the clone lay naked on a disposable pallet.}
19. pg 294 The [meats] are gene-programmed... {The word is
correct, meats.}
20. pg 312 Always this embarrassment, [pies] illusions about him,
{The word embarrassment ends a sentence and should have a period
after it. The first word in the next sentence is People's.}
21. pg 312 ....I should notify the Nexus police," [Dar ?] {The
two words should be Dana said.}
22. pg 338 ...he would easily and without guilt take it [?} me
{The word is from.}
23. pg 346 ...I feel like a [?] {The word is swim.}
24. pg 385 The [?] held where it had been empty. {The sentence
should read, The field where it had been was empty.}
Thank you,
Elizabeth Hobbs
